Monday, January 4, 2010

Check out time

There’s a knock at the door, I whisper “baby I thought you said he thinks you’re at work?” “Check out time” the housekeeper yells. Baby this will have to be the last time, but we said that the last time. I just hope our alibi checks out this time. See ya next time.

4 comments:

  1. This is triffling! Take this "ish" down. It's comments like this that has black marriages/relationships in trouble now!

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  2. His comments don't have anything to do with marriges not working? He is stating something that happens every day. Its people that don't stay honest in a relationship that messes things up this is most ridiculous thing I heard really?!

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  3. His comments don't have anything to do with marriges not working? He is stating something that happens every day. Its people that don't stay honest in a relationship that messes things up this is most ridiculous thing I heard really?!

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  4. Was it so good to steal it over and over again The plum of her nectar so sweet
    The brush of her hand across your cheek
    Leaving you meek and mind blown that you that you were in her home
    Your mind for a spell dwindled when she yelled "Checkout"!
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    People its Poetry,and it may be a true story but its still an "ART of Writing" get a grip for real!! He asked for comments not insults. so that you know Ryan I appreciate your Art.

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